My latest Hump Day Hook comes from my erotic sci fi, MESSAGE FROM VIOLA MARI. Best friend Jennifer is trying to persuade heroine, Marissa Jones, to take a science fiction novel writing class.
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Gentleman, cover your nuts! lol, that last line made me laugh. Sounds about like my own luck if I were ever to attempt golf…or tennis. Seriously, though, I understand her trepidation about the writing group. It’s hard for some of us to put our writing on display for critique by others, especially by others who may not necessarily be qualified to critique it. But what are best friends for if not to set you up and complicate your life? lol, nice hook.
I love the humor, it’s a great hook! 🙂
I liked the golf reference in the last paragraph. Funny! Thanks for sharing! 🙂
C.R.
Hehe, love the touch of humour in this one. Great hook.
Humor and a great hook! You can’t ask for more on HDH!
I like the tone of her inner talk. It gives a good sense of her personality, and I want more. Nice hook!
Haha. Love her inner sarcastic tone. Great job!
Lol! Definitely not the way I’d want to spend the weekend!
Great sense of humor – I love the voice in this book, great hook!